The WOKJ Rap Contest (Bracket/Schedule Posted - p.6)
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Terminator1997
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torrino torrino claimin' my rhymes are bad,
then he asks for my fuckin' help, ain't that sad?
you best check yo self before you spew that shit,
my raps will leave you dazed and confused, and throwin' a fit.
don't step in a man's house kid, with those weak raps,
because all you will feel is my lyrical slaps.
i'm more than a rap king, i'm a rap master,
so torrino don't try to match me, it'll just end in disaster.
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lovemerox
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Term thinks he got this shit down
When it reality he just a clown
comin up in dis bitch, thinkin he all cool
Cmon term, you just makin yourself look a fool
Zing aint nuttin but a busta, wit no skills at all
Wit you weak ass rhymed, dont worry man, Ill break yo fall
You the worst MOD, ne message board has ever seen
its kinda sad and sick, how much you love AVP
Torrio man, How man times I gotta say
you mothas a whore, and yo rhymes are gay
Give it up now...U the last in the pack
U talkin all this shit, like u doped up on crack
Yet again, I spit my rhymes at yall queens
none yall really knowin, what the hell I mean
I keep these flows comin, you know I always will
With that Im out yall, PEACE~~Bill
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torrino
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lovemerox wrote: Term thinks he got this shit down
When it reality he just a clown
comin up in dis bitch, thinkin he all cool
Cmon term, you just makin yourself look a fool
Zing aint nuttin but a busta, wit no skills at all
Wit you weak ass rhymed, dont worry man, Ill break yo fall
You the worst MOD, ne message board has ever seen
its kinda sad and sick, how much you love AVP
Torrio man, How man times I gotta say
you mothas a whore, and yo rhymes are gay
Give it up now...U the last in the pack
U talkin all this shit, like u doped up on crack
Yet again, I spit my rhymes at yall queens
none yall really knowin, what the hell I mean
I keep these flows comin, you know I always will
With that Im out yall, PEACE~~Bill ...Good job. You blew Zingaling's "Matt + Evan" rhyme out of the water...
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Terminator1997
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Lovemerox tryin' to step up his game,
when he really just sounds pathetic and lame.
Don't mess with the bull son, you will get the horns,
beware of the top dog, my sign warns.
you can't top this, your style is whack,
you should know by now that i'm the head of the pack.
my raps can't be topped, they can't be beat,
go home now or face defeat.
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dolcevita
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Hell ya I'm *teh* queen you have a problem with that?
If you do let me tell you I don't got your back.
And you'll be backing that up fresh against the wall, you'll see,
there's nothing left to say between you and me.
I wouldn't want to disgrace you where you ain't deservin' it,
You'll not catch me flippin quips about modding, looks or your momma one bit.
No no boy there's no need, when all is said and done,
this is 'bout my words being quicker than yo' gun.
Lets not forget this is ALL good and fun,
before I take you down quick with nary a fight.
L, watch my Lips as they keep rhyming tight,
M, that's the Money where my Mouth cuts a bite.
R, don't be foolin yourself good and Right.
Now watch your words and acronyms boy,
cause you know who'se gonna beat'yA?
L.M.R don't be announcing victory joy
for lovemerox no,
they be representin' DOLCEVITA.
Last edited by dolcevita on Tue Feb 22, 2005 10:31 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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lovemerox
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dolcevita wrote: Hell ya I'm *teh* queen you have a problem with that?
If you do let me tell you I don't got your back.
And you'll be backing that up fresh against the wall, you'll see,
there's nothing left to say between you and me.
I wouldn't want to disgrace you where you ain't deservin' it,
You'll not catch me flippin quips about modding, looks or your momma one bit.
No no boy there's no need, when all is said and done,
this is 'bout my words being quicker than yo' gun.
Lets not forget this is ALL good and fun,
before I take you down quick with nary a fight.
L, watch my Lips as they keep rhyming tight,
M, that's the Money where my Mouth cuts a bite.
R, don't be foolin yourself good and Right.
Now watch your words and acronyms boy,
cause you know who'se gonna beat'cha?
L.M.R don't be announcing victory joy
for lovemerox no,
they be representin' DOLCEVITA. =D> =D> Haha very good my dear! _________________
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torrino
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lovemerox wrote: dolcevita wrote: Hell ya I'm *teh* queen you have a problem with that?
If you do let me tell you I don't got your back.
And you'll be backing that up fresh against the wall, you'll see,
there's nothing left to say between you and me.
I wouldn't want to disgrace you where you ain't deservin' it,
You'll not catch me flippin quips about modding, looks or your momma one bit.
No no boy there's no need, when all is said and done,
this is 'bout my words being quicker than yo' gun.
Lets not forget this is ALL good and fun,
before I take you down quick with nary a fight.
L, watch my Lips as they keep rhyming tight,
M, that's the Money where my Mouth cuts a bite.
R, don't be foolin yourself good and Right.
Now watch your words and acronyms boy,
cause you know who'se gonna beat'cha?
L.M.R don't be announcing victory joy
for lovemerox no,
they be representin' DOLCEVITA. =D> =D> Haha very good my dear! I'll take my own stab at lovemerox...soon...
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torrino
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I made this thread thinkin' I'd have some competition
But, as you can see, it might be difficult reaching MY position
Y'all think you've got some inately born gift
Fuck, any hint of talent was chopped off at your bris
There's only one guy who's got a bit of talent and that's Termi
But, alas, he's a Clevelander and they all get caught with herpes
Zingaling, I realize you're rich and you bought a diamond for your first dame
The money don't change the fact that your lyrics are hella lame
And, dolce. London's calling and I don't wanna shout
But I still have no fucking clue what your heady lyrics are all about
I've got enough power in me that I won't get beat
If Willie Nelson gives me a bag, I'll smoke it and then I'll cheat.
And, with my latest stream of insults, I'd like to conclude.
lovemerox. Your rhymes might be better if you stopped writing them nude.
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Jeff
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torrino wrote: I made this thread thinkin' I'd have some competition
But, as you can see, it might be difficult reaching MY position
Y'all think you've got some inately born gift
Fuck, any hint of talent was chopped off at your bris
There's only one guy who's got a bit of talent and that's Termi
But, alas, he's a Clevelander and they all get caught with herpes
Zingaling, I realize you're rich and you bought a diamond for your first dame
The money don't change the fact that your lyrics are hella lame
And, dolce. London's calling and I don't wanna shout
But I still have no fucking clue what your heady lyrics are all about
I've got enough power in me that I won't get beat
If Willie Nelson gives me a bag, I'll smoke it and then I'll cheat.
And, with my latest stream of insults, I'd like to conclude.
lovemerox. Your rhymes might be better if you stopped writing them nude. Better then most, but sadly still medles in mediocrity. 6.5/10 (B-)
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dolcevita wrote: Hell ya I'm *teh* queen you have a problem with that?
If you do let me tell you I don't got your back.
And you'll be backing that up fresh against the wall, you'll see,
there's nothing left to say between you and me.
I wouldn't want to disgrace you where you ain't deservin' it,
You'll not catch me flippin quips about modding, looks or your momma one bit.
No no boy there's no need, when all is said and done,
this is 'bout my words being quicker than yo' gun.
Lets not forget this is ALL good and fun,
before I take you down quick with nary a fight.
L, watch my Lips as they keep rhyming tight,
M, that's the Money where my Mouth cuts a bite.
R, don't be foolin yourself good and Right.
Now watch your words and acronyms boy,
cause you know who'se gonna beat'yA?
L.M.R don't be announcing victory joy
for lovemerox no,
they be representin' DOLCEVITA. Nice. Doesn't flow as good as it could, but quite humorous. Better then many, but not at the top. 7.5/10 (B+)
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RogueCommander wrote: torrino wrote: I made this thread thinkin' I'd have some competition
But, as you can see, it might be difficult reaching MY position
Y'all think you've got some inately born gift
Fuck, any hint of talent was chopped off at your bris
There's only one guy who's got a bit of talent and that's Termi
But, alas, he's a Clevelander and they all get caught with herpes
Zingaling, I realize you're rich and you bought a diamond for your first dame
The money don't change the fact that your lyrics are hella lame
And, dolce. London's calling and I don't wanna shout
But I still have no fucking clue what your heady lyrics are all about
I've got enough power in me that I won't get beat
If Willie Nelson gives me a bag, I'll smoke it and then I'll cheat.
And, with my latest stream of insults, I'd like to conclude.
lovemerox. Your rhymes might be better if you stopped writing them nude. Better then most, but sadly still medles in mediocrity. 6.5/10 (B-) What about my most recent one! _________________
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Terminator1997 wrote: Lovemerox tryin' to step up his game,
when he really just sounds pathetic and lame.
Don't mess with the bull son, you will get the horns,
beware of the top dog, my sign warns.
you can't top this, your style is whack,
you should know by now that i'm the head of the pack.
my raps can't be topped, they can't be beat,
go home now or face defeat. Nice. To the point without medling. 8.0/10 (A-)
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torrino
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RogueCommander, I ain't toleratin' this rating crap
I ain't acceptin' the fact that dolcevita outperformed me in a rap
So, you can go fuck yourself until you raise it higher
Ya better or you'll successfully convince me to retire
Ain't it dire? The day a female beats a male in actin' black
On the basis of degrees, experience, and other frickin' wack.
I know that sucked. Yeah, I do.
But I demand a raise or else I'll sue.
WHAT NOT BITCH? I'M PHOBIC OF DEM FEMALES. YEAH, I'M A PRICK. BUT THIS RIGHT HERE IS JUST SICK
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Terminator1997
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^^^ :rock:
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Listen Whorino, Now you have gone too far
You insult rogue with a rap that is below par
Here's a shovel, there's the cemetary, your own grave you will dig.
But before, don't forget to pray, kneel and keep your priest pleasing gig. :wink:
I can't believe you think you're the best, dude what the dilly?
You're performances are scarier than a child of Ashley and Milli Vanilli. :wink:
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Terminator1997
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neostorm wrote: Listen Whorino, Now you have gone too far
You insult rogue with a rap that is below par
Here's a shovel, there's the cemetary, your own grave you will dig. :wink:
But before, don't forget to pray, kneel and keep your priest pleasing gig.
I can't believe you think you're the best, dude what the dilly?
You're performances are scarier than a child of Ashley and Milli Vanilli. :wink: lol love that last line =D>
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neostorm wrote: Listen Whorino, Now you have gone too far
You insult rogue with a rap that is below par
Here's a shovel, there's the cemetary, your own grave you will dig.
But before, don't forget to pray, kneel and keep your priest pleasing gig. :wink:
I can't believe you think you're the best, dude what the dilly?
You're performances are scarier than a child of Ashley and Milli Vanilli. :wink: 4TH LINE IS THE BEST LINE EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! _________________
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torrino
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 How can anyone be the brainchild of Ashley and Milli Vanilli
It ain't possible to have two dads. Claiming I do is just plain silly.
But, if I'm from them, I wonder what KJers assume about you?
There's no doubt in my mind that it's negative. I need no clue.
It's between MJ Version 5.5 and one Miss Cleo
They wanted it to rhyme so they called you neo
Makes no sense to me. Naming someone after Keanu Reeves
Of course. They had begun to smoke tons of weed
I'll play this nice and easy and treat you with respect
But, with this. New, improved rhymes I expect
I don't want no full-blown crap comparing torrino to a priest
Those kinda analogies are so bad, they piss me off the least.
And I'm a pretty angry guy. I should dial 1-800-CALL-BUDDY
I've already given Terminator a concussion. You want things to get bloody?
All you've gotta do is continue with your crappy rhymes that irritate me
Comment on the size of my dick and my latest shooting spree
So fuck off neostorm, because you ain't got nothin' except no skill
Continue and I'll get Spiderman2005 to drag you to "Alone in the Dark" against yo will.
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torrino wrote: How can anyone be the brainchild of Ashley and Milli Vanilli
It ain't possible to have two dads. Claiming I do is just plain silly.
But, if I'm from them, I wonder what KJers assume about you?
There's no doubt in my mind that it's negative. I need no clue.
It's between MJ Version 5.5 and one Miss Cleo
They wanted it to rhyme so they called you neo
Makes no sense to me. Naming someone after Keanu Reeves
Of course. They had begun to smoke tons of weed
I'll play this nice and easy and treat you with respect
But, with this. New, improved rhymes I expect
I don't want no full-blown crap comparing torrino to a priest
Those kinda analogies are so bad, they piss me off the least.
And I'm a pretty angry guy. I should dial 1-800-CALL-BUDDY
I've already given Terminator a concussion. You want things to get bloody?
All you've gotta do is continue with your crappy rhymes that irritate me
Comment on the size of my dick and my latest shooting spree
So fuck off neostorm, because you ain't got nothin' except no skill
Continue and I'll get Spiderman2005 to drag you to "Alone in the Dark" against yo will.
Touche =D>
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lovemerox wrote: Term thinks he got this shit down
When it reality he just a clown
comin up in dis bitch, thinkin he all cool
Cmon term, you just makin yourself look a fool
Zing aint nuttin but a busta, wit no skills at all
Wit you weak ass rhymed, dont worry man, Ill break yo fall
You the worst MOD, ne message board has ever seen
its kinda sad and sick, how much you love AVP
Torrio man, How man times I gotta say
you mothas a whore, and yo rhymes are gay
Give it up now...U the last in the pack
U talkin all this shit, like u doped up on crack
Yet again, I spit my rhymes at yall queens
none yall really knowin, what the hell I mean
I keep these flows comin, you know I always will
With that Im out yall, PEACE~~Bill Much better then your last effort. Still could use some better flow. 7.5/10 (B+)
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torrino
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Torrino's got rhymes that make y'all go crazy
Crazier than the taxi driver in that film by Scors(ay)se
But, torrino ain't just a hilarious 'n an ill-mannered kid
He's got to reveal things y'all try to keep hid
When torrino talks, he's always got somethin' to say
This little bit ain't just news, as it don't happen everyday
NEWS FLASH. Terminator's girlfriend is a slut
She was spotted with her two hands fully surrounding neo's butt.
Anal sex. Right. Just pawfect for a young, responsible chick
I wonder where she was when you was watchin' the time tick
She's a naughty, naughty female, Termi. That's what she really is
After she got off the bed she knew she wanted her own biz
neo gave her a five-spot. Perhaps even a ten
But the money wasn't the issue here. She needed real men
She told you she hated Cleveland. Five months ago
But you couldn't. You was intimate with your boss's ho
You're mainly responsible. She was all about the sex
She was lackin' at home, so she hitched a ride with Mr. X
Mr. X couldn't satisfy her. He had his lovely own.
He was too protective. He wouldn't let her get in the zone.
That's when she met neo. Why'd you think his rhymes got worse?
Because of classes? No. That's as realistic as claiming he was cursed.
So they hooked up. They did so for a while
Friday night movies. Makin' out in the aisle
He was anxious to get it on. He needed her to go down low.
At that point she realized she was passionate about givin' blows.
I apologize man. Don't let it ruin your game.
You've got some talent. Don't let Zingy take your name
But, while I'm at it, may I suggest Sharon Stone?
She's rich. She's 50. And she's all alone.
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torrino wrote: Torrino's got rhymes that make y'all go crazy
Crazier than the taxi driver in that film by Scors(ay)se
But, torrino ain't just a hilarious 'n an ill-mannered kid
He's got to reveal things y'all try to keep hid
When torrino talks, he's always got somethin' to say
This little bit ain't just news, as it don't happen everyday
NEWS FLASH. Terminator's girlfriend is a slut
She was spotted with her two hands fully surrounding neo's butt.
Anal sex. Right. Just pawfect for a young, responsible chick
I wonder where she was when you was watchin' the time tick
She's a naughty, naughty female, Termi. That's what she really is
After she got off the bed she knew she wanted her own biz
neo gave her a five-spot. Perhaps even a ten
But the money wasn't the issue here. She needed real men
She told you she hated Cleveland. Five months ago
But you couldn't. You was intimate with your boss's ho
You're mainly responsible. She was all about the sex
She was lackin' at home, so she hitched a ride with Mr. X
Mr. X couldn't satisfy her. He had his lovely own.
He was too protective. He wouldn't let her get in the zone.
That's when she met neo. Why'd you think his rhymes got worse?
Because of classes? No. That's as realistic as claiming he was cursed.
So they hooked up. They did so for a while
Friday night movies. Makin' out in the aisle
He was anxious to get it on. He needed her to go down low.
At that point she realized she was passionate about givin' blows.
I apologize man. Don't let it ruin your game.
You've got some talent. Don't let Zingy take your name
But, while I'm at it, may I suggest Sharon Stone?
She's rich. She's 50. And she's all alone. Great. Your best thus far. And your first A! 9.5/10 (A)
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Terminator1997
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Torrino Torrino, what the hell does he know,
He has a girl but she uglier than Janet Reno.
He got his first A, he's movin' up,
but now i'm gonna kick some sweet rhymes so you better wear a cup.
He thinks he's good, but his rhymes are still weak,
i could think of better raps while i'm takin' a leak.
Y'all thought i was gone, but i've come back strong,
my rhymes are hotter than Jessica Biel in a thong.
Torrino thought he won, what a mistake,
he sees me back here rappin' and he's startin' to shake.
I'll say one more thing before i'm through,
Torrino i'm still the king so..... fuck you!
:rock: WORD UP BIZNATCH!! :afro:
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torrino
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Terminator, Terminator, how drunk were you?
What'd I tell you about mixin' Cold Turkey with Mountain Dew?
The alcohol hurts you. It makes my mom look better
She could spit better shit while knittin' a blue sweater
Your shit sounds good. It has a nice flow.
But they be indistinguishable from your other shit, bro.
My lyrics be memorable. They be right from my heart
If you knew I was emotional, why'd you agree to start?
Boy, I've already told you that I'm quite a bloody guy
I'll get Angelina to seduce you and then I'll get you high
Torrino's so evil, he'll tape it and use it for money.
And what does that go to? Conversing wit a new honey
You might ask me why I've got all of dem drugs
It ain't cuz I'm a gangsta. Nor a lowly thug
Torrino's just a full individual with a little fetish 'n desire
But, why the hell you care? It lets you rank higher.
Regardless, torrino be tired. He be passin' out
If Scarlett came up. He'd be too exhausted to twist 'n shout
But even a drunk, high torrino is better than you be nice 'n clean
Druggie or not, it don't change the fact that just you got served by a teen
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Neostorm
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Whorino dont know jack, you dont know shit
My rhymes so good, you gonna get hit
You're rhymes are to crap, like pig is to bacon.
With a dildo in your mouth, you look gayer than Clay Aiken.
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